rainbow1907: (Brian Face)
rainbow1907 ([personal profile] rainbow1907) wrote2011-02-22 01:57 pm

Drabble - Goodbye

Title: Goodbye
Author: [livejournal.com profile] rainbow1907
Fandom: Queer As Folk US
Timeline: Post 513
Word Count: 100
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I don't own anything, no copyright infringement intended, just playing with the boys...
Beta: Many thanks to my wonderful beta [livejournal.com profile] buckeye5 !!! Any remaining mistakes are mine.
Author's Note: Written for the February 2011 challenge at [livejournal.com profile] drabblechalleng.
Feedback: Yes, please! Rena


Prompt:




Goodbye

Brian stared at the picture on the wall opposite the window. A generic tropical beach view.

Sterile.

Cold.

Like the room. Like…

A muscle in his jaw ticked as he listened to the doctor’s spiel about how they had done all they could, but that her condition wouldn’t improve anymore. A drunken fall down the basement stairs and the resulting fractured skull had put mommy dearest in a permanent vegetative coma.

“We are the best facility in this state, Mr. Kinney. Your mother will be well taken care of.”

Goodbye, mother.

Brian knew that he would never come here again.





Made by [livejournal.com profile] tallie363

[identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 01:28 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you so much for that,my dear Rena! such a moving story. it makes a lot of sense for Brian,imo. and what a brilliant use of the prompt!
*hugs you tight*
V.

[identity profile] rainbow1907.livejournal.com 2011-02-22 02:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, Vered, I'm glad to hear that you liked this. Huge hugs, Rena :)