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rainbow1907 ([personal profile] rainbow1907) wrote2010-11-08 04:41 pm

Drabble - Together

Title: Together
Author: [livejournal.com profile] rainbow1907
Fandom: Queer As Folk US
Pairing: Brian/Justin
Timeline: Season 4, set during the cancer arc.
Word Count: 100
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I don't own anything, no copyright infringement intended, just playing with the boys...
Beta: Many thanks to my wonderful beta [livejournal.com profile] buckeye5 !!! All remaining mistakes are mine.
Author's Note: Written for Prompt # 1 of the November 2010 Drabble Challenge at [livejournal.com profile] drabblechalleng.
Feedback: Yes, please! Rena


Prompt:







Panting and shivering uncontrollably he collapsed onto his bed in a graceless heap, his body protectively curling itself into a tight little ball.

Feeling utterly exhausted and unbearably sick he wondered not for the first time since starting radiation if it wouldn’t have been easier for him to go to Ibiza.

The bed dipped and strong arms carefully circled him from behind, warmth spooning into his trembling back, easing the convulsions, offering comfort, strength and silent support.

“Sssh… it’s okay, Brian… I’ve got you.”

Their silent tears soak into the bedding.

No, he decided, they’d go there together one day.





[identity profile] teatotaller.livejournal.com 2010-11-08 03:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I can totally see Brian thinking that Ibiza would have been an easier choice.

This packs quite a punch into 100 words. I think you did a great job.

[identity profile] rainbow1907.livejournal.com 2010-11-09 08:20 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you for your wonderful comment, so nice of you! Rena :)

[identity profile] pet0511.livejournal.com 2010-11-08 04:07 pm (UTC)(link)
I think so too. It's an unbelievable intense 100 word drabble saying so much more, saying everything. Whow.
Thank you for that! Pet

[identity profile] rainbow1907.livejournal.com 2010-11-09 08:24 am (UTC)(link)
Und auch Dir, Pet, ein riesiges Dankeschön für Deinen wunderbaren Kommentar. Bin total geplättet ;) - dieser Drabble kam wirklich unglaublich gut an. Liebe Grüße, Rena ♥

[identity profile] pam81.livejournal.com 2010-11-08 05:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Rena sweetie... this was extremely beautiful.
So intense....very well done ♥

[identity profile] rainbow1907.livejournal.com 2010-11-09 08:25 am (UTC)(link)
You make me happy :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! Rena ♥

[identity profile] aaa-mazing.livejournal.com 2010-11-09 01:02 am (UTC)(link)
Just beautiful! (You ARE on drabbles, sweetie:)

[identity profile] rainbow1907.livejournal.com 2010-11-09 08:27 am (UTC)(link)
I have to say - it's the drug of my choice right now LOL
Thank you for your nice comment, dear! Rena :)

[identity profile] bknjt.livejournal.com 2010-11-10 12:58 am (UTC)(link)
Beautiful.... Brian will never take the "easy" way out...with Justin's love and support... he has hope....

[identity profile] rainbow1907.livejournal.com 2010-11-10 07:00 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, as long as they are together they can work through almost everything, they really complete each other. And Justin is strong, he can support Brian through this. Another time, it may be the other way round. Thank you for your comment, very much appreciated. Rena :)