My first drabble

[rainbow1907]

So I had this running around in my mind today. My very first try at writing something in the fandom, my first try at writing anything outside my native language. So I'm unsure about it - is this any good at all? Timeline would be Post 513. Thanks for reading - Rena




He woke with a strangled gasp, tangled in sweaty sheets, fear squeezing his throat and his heart painfully hammering in his chest. Grateful that the nightmare's images were fading away.
Though he could still smell him on the sheets from his visit last weekend it was not enough.
Shit, he would never be able to get back to sleep after this...

He answered his phone after the second ringtone, voice sleepy and soft.
Worried.
"Brian, hey... another nightmare?"
Soothing.
"Hey... I'm... I'm okay."

He could hear the smile in Justin's soft sigh.
"Guess I just needed to hear your voice."

Comments

[buckeye5.livejournal.com]

I think it's wonderful!! You did a really great job, Rena! Keep writing, I want to read more.

And if you ever want someone to look over something before you post it (although this one didn't need any help at all!), let me know. I can't commit to something long but drabbles and ficlets I can do.

Thank you for sharing this! Brava!

[rainbow1907.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much, Laurie, your comment means so much to me!!! I was really unsure about posting but now I'm so glad I did. And your icon is absolutely lovely! Thanks also for your nice offer of help. I'm sure I'll get to the point that I want to ask for the opinion of an experienced writer. You really made my day... hugs, Rena