The charloft Cupid Challenge - Siblings

[rainbow1907]

Title: Siblings
Author: rainbow1907
Fandom: Queer As Folk US
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I don't own anything, no copyright infringement intended, just playing with the boys...
Author's Note: This was written for the charloft Cupid Challenge.
Feedback: Yes, please! Rena


The charloft Cupid Challenge

How's it work? You go to the link above, where a list of six words loosely related to the concept of love will be generated for you. The challenge for this activity is to use as many of them as you can in one piece of fiction, with more points being awarded the shorter the finished piece.
'The shorter?' you say. And yes, I say, the shorter! This challenge rewards precision and economy of language-- it can be surprisingly difficult to use six assigned words in one story, and the difficulty increases when you're trying to do it in, say, the length of a drabble.


My six words: agape, girlfriend, tango, heart attack, frigid, pose

My word count: 97


Siblings

“You did what?” Justin stood staring at his sister, mouth agape.

“I walked in on Dad and his girlfriend doing the horizontal tango and it was like ewww! I swear I thought I’d have a heart attack. And when the frigid bitch saw me… would you believe she actually smirked at me? God, I hate her, she’s such a cow.”

Molly pretended not to care but Justin wasn’t deceived by her nonchalant pose. He took her in his arms, gently kissing her on the cheek.

“You know what I think? She and Dad truly deserve each other.”







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Comments

[pet0511.livejournal.com]

I really do believe that this is difficult. I have read about such a challenge before, could it have been the Zombie fic you recced?
But you did good here, it fits, makes sense and I really like the way the siblings act with each other. Thanks!!! Pet

[rainbow1907.livejournal.com]

I'm not sure, there's always some interesting challenges around ;)
Many thanks, Pet! I'm happy that you liked this. Have a great week! Rena ♥

[shadownyc.livejournal.com]

This is so lovely.

[rainbow1907.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! Rena :)

[rockie2010.livejournal.com]

Now that's talent :)

Great job! I like

[rainbow1907.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank you so much! *hugs* Rena

[kinnetikdreams.livejournal.com]

Have to admit I like it - it is nice to see Justin and Molly finally able to have a conversation that does not start with Molly saying " ..... he doesn't want to"

xxxxx

[rainbow1907.livejournal.com]

I always thought it was a pity that Molly never got a chance to grow up on the show, she could have been more than Justin's invisible little sister. Many thanks, Rena :)

[pam81.livejournal.com]

Wow! That was not easy, but you made a great job Rena.
This is really lovely, thanks ♥ Hugs

[rainbow1907.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much, Pam :) You always give the nicest feedback ♥ Rena